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Are you influenced by what you see on TV? Or by what you read?

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In my personal opinion, I think I'm very influenced by what I watch on TV. There are many reasons why I think so.
First, people these days have more media exposure than they read.
For example, there are more people who watch TV or YouTube than people who read books or magazines. In addition, the age of viewing video is getting younger, so it will be easy for media to be affectd from an early age.
Second, the video is more memorable and easy to attract people's attention than watching it in text.
Because each person has different understanding skills, it takes different time to understand and accept texts, but is takes less time to accept the video unless there is a problem with watching and listening. Also, videos are more convenient to understand.

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