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If you were a policymaker, how would you address the growing student debt and youth unemployment cri

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I'd take separate approaches to address each issue. To reduce youth unemployment, I'd implement policies that help companies hire more graduates. One major reform would be to create a more flexible labor environment, similar to what exists in America. Rigid Korean labor laws often make companies hesitant to hire new employees due to the difficulty of dismissal. While this may slightly reduce job security, it would increase overall job opportunities by encouraging more hiring and mobility in the labor market.
As for growing student debt, we should stop suppressing tuition fee increases. Many high-quality faculty members are leaving Korea in search of better pay and working conditions abroad. To maintain educational quality, universities must be allowed to raise tuition for enough budget. Also, students should be encouraged to take more responsibility for funding their education. They need to be encouraged to work their way through college in addition to government's policy for them.

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Mr. Steve, 

These are good inputs. Thanks for sharing!

- Teacher Ash

I'd take separate approaches to address each issue.

>> CORRECT!


 To reduce youth unemployment, I'd implement policies that help companies hire more graduates.

>>CORRECT!


 One major reform would be to create a more flexible labor environment, similar to what exists in America.

>>CORRECT!


 Rigid Korean labor laws often make companies hesitant to hire new employees due to the difficulty of dismissal.

>>CORRECT!


 While this may slightly reduce job security, it would increase overall job opportunities by encouraging more hiring and mobility in the labor market.

>>CORRECT!


As for growing student debt, we should stop suppressing tuition fee increases.

>>CORRECT!


 Many high-quality faculty members are leaving Korea in search of better pay and working conditions abroad.

>>CORRECT!


 To maintain educational quality, universities must be allowed to raise tuition for enough budget.

>> To maintain educational quality, universities must be allowed to raise tuition to raise enough budget.


Also, students should be encouraged to take more responsibility for funding their education.

>>CORRECT!


 They need to be encouraged to work their way through college in addition to government's policy for them.

>> They need to be encouraged to work their way through college in addition to the government's policy for them.


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