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keeping gifts you don\'t like or need

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Sometimes, we get gifts that we don't really like or can't use.Still I believe we should keep them, at least for some time.The reason is simple : it shows respect for the person who gave the gift.When someone gives us a gift, they are showing love, care, or appreciation, even if the gift is not perfect for us.The thought behind it is important.If we throw it away or give it to someone else too soon, it might hurt the giver's feelings. We don't have to keep everything forever. But keeping a gift for a while shows that we care about the person who gave it to us. It is a small way to say thank you for their kindness.
In the end, a gift is more than just an object.It's a sign of someone's heart.
That's why we should try to keep even the gifts we don't like or need.

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Hello, Ms. Judy! That¡¯s a sweet way to look at it! Even if a gift isn¡¯t our style, it¡¯s nice to keep it for a bit—it shows we appreciate the thought. After all, it¡¯s the gesture that counts, not just the item.
-T. Sonny
Sometimes, we get gifts that we don't really like or can't use.
>>Correct!
Still I believe we should keep them, at least for some time.
>>Correct!
The reason is simple : it shows respect for the person who gave the gift.
>>The reason is simple: it shows respect for the person who gave the gift.
When someone gives us a gift, they are showing love, care, or appreciation, even if the gift is not perfect for us.
>>Correct!
The thought behind it is important.
>>Correct!
OR. The thought behind it is what truly matters.
If we throw it away or give it to someone else too soon, it might hurt the giver's feelings. 
>>Correct!
We don't have to keep everything forever. 
>>Correct!
But keeping a gift for a while shows that we care about the person who gave it to us. 
>>But holding onto a gift for a while shows that we care about the person who gave it.
It is a small way to say thank you for their kindness.
>>Correct!
In the end, a gift is more than just an object.
>>Correct!
It's a sign of someone's heart.
>>Correct!
That's why we should try to keep even the gifts we don't like or need.
>>Correct!
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