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My boss is too much talker

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My team has a weekly issue meeting with our CEO. These days, he focuses on the working culture. He didn't make decisions about our meeting topic, and he continuously spoke about how we should work. So I have turned his attention to any essential issue. That's why the meeting would end at the regular time.

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Hello, Ella!

Sometimes, the CEO have many things in mind, they can forget the main agenda. Good thing for your CEO, he has you to remind him of the priorities of your company.

Congratulations for a well-written composition! I am so glad that the grammar lessons we have are evident here on your writing. There is only one suggestion which is using 'the" in your fourth sentence. Your hard work is paying off. Thank you for this homework answer.

See you in class.

T. Donna~

My team has a weekly issue meeting with our CEO. These days, he focuses on the working culture. He didn't make decisions about our meeting topic, and he continuously spoke about how we should work. So I have turned his attention to any essential issue. That's why the meeting would end at the regular time.
>> My team has a weekly issue meeting with our CEO. These days, he focuses on the working culture. He didn't make decisions about our meeting topic, and he continuously spoke about how we should work. So I have turned his attention to the essential issue. That's why the meeting would end at the regular time.
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