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The homework for 1st August.

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Q : Can rude behavior ever be acceptable in certain situations?

A : In my opinion, yes it can be.
If a person who meet first time do rude behavior to me, I will do same behavior no matter what how old he is.
I think all people should respect other person especially when meet first.
However, I will don't do rude behavior if counterparts don't do that.

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Hi Eddy,
As always, thank you for taking the time to answer this question.~^^
I agree with your point. When people let others treat them rudely, it often leads to ongoing disrespect, and that¡¯s never good in the long run. 
In situations like this, establishing clear boundaries is very important.
By the way, thank you for your time tonight. See you again tomorrow, if you're not busy.~^^
- Teacher Elly~


A : In my opinion, yes it can be.
>> In my opinion, yes, it can be. (Add comma after yes.)

If a person who meet first time do rude behavior to me, I will do same behavior no matter what how old he is.
>> If a person I meet for the first time behaves rudely toward me, I will do the same, no matter how old they are.
OR >> If someone I meet for the first time is rude to me, I will respond the same way, regardless of their age.

I think all people should respect other person especially when meet first.
>> I think all people should respect others, especially when meeting for the first time.
OR >> I believe everyone should treat others with respect, especially during a first meeting.

However, I will don't do rude behavior if counterparts don't do that.
>> However, I won¡¯t behave rudely if others don¡¯t.
OR >> However, I will not be rude if the other person isn¡¯t.
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