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HOMEWORK:
[Writing Exercise] How do you express your disappointment to someone?

I feel disappointment that I communicated someone.
If I don't talk, I can't remove my feelings.
I'm passive for my emotion. and I don' like incorrent relation.
Also, If I'm disappointed in my wife, I'm going to resolve it on the day.

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Good evening, Chang Min!

When you're disappointed, it's critical to accept your emotions, give yourself space to absorb them, and then figure out constructive methods to proceed.
Changing your expectations, getting help, or concentrating on constructive pursuits could all be part of this. 

Thank you so much for finding time to answer your homework. I will see you in our next class.^^

Practice English whenever you can!

__Teacher Mayleen :)


I feel disappointment that I communicated someone.
>>> If I feel disappointment, I communicate with that someone.

If I don't talk, I can't remove my feelings.
>>> If I don't talk, I can't get rid of my negative feelings.

I'm passive for my emotion. and I don' like incorrent relation.
>>> I'm passive about my emotion. and I don't like incorrect relations.

Also, If I'm disappointed in my wife, I'm going to resolve it on the day.
>>> Also, if I'm disappointed in my wife, I'm going to resolve it on the day.
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