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I know that Hong Kong is very small country like South Korea but there is the hub of global financial .

They don't have wide land, factory and industrial facilities.

In addition, it is in political conflict with China like gang that is the strongest power in the world.

The investment immigration policy is very active and aggressive.

I envy like positive policies of the government.

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Hello, Ms. Lily!
Did you know that prior to this article, there were already a lot of Koreans living in Hong Kong? They have a lot of issues living there, but I wonder why they do not go back to your country? Thank you for this!
Aki~

I know that Hong Kong is very small country like South Korea but there is the hub of global financial .
>>> I know that Hong Kong is a very small country like South Korea, but it is a hub of the global financial market.

They don't have wide land, factory and industrial facilities.
>>> They don't have a wide land, factories, or industrial facilities.

In addition, it is in political conflict with China like gang that is the strongest power in the world.
>>> In addition, it is in political conflict with China, like a gang that is the strongest power in the world.

The investment immigration policy is very active and aggressive.
>>> CORRECT!

I envy like positive policies of the government.
>>> CORRECT!

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