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I would like to go to Aria Restaurant at the Westin Chosun Hotel. It is a buffet restaurant.
I like seafood and fresh salad, but my husband and my son like meat and sushi.
At Aria Restaurant, we can all enjoy our favorite foods.
It has a variety food and delicious dishes.
we will soon eat out there on our celebration.

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Hello, Jane!

I searched Aria Restaurant at the Westin Chosun and the place is classy with very delectable and mouthwatering dishes. Since you are into seafood and fresh salad and your husband and son love meat and sushi, this is the perfect place for you to dine altogether. 

I saw some of the desserts and they are a sure hit!

Below, I have a few suggestions in inserting the right preposition as well as the capitalization of the first word in a sentence. Study them carefully.

Thank you for submitting this homework. I always appreciate your effort in our activities.

See you on Friday!

-T. Donna~

I would like to go to Aria Restaurant at the Westin Chosun Hotel. It is a buffet restaurant.
I like seafood and fresh salad, but my husband and my son like meat and sushi.
>> Correct! Very good sentences!

At Aria Restaurant, we can all enjoy our favorite foods.
It has a variety food and delicious dishes.
we will soon eat out there on our celebration.
>> ...It has a variety of food and delicious dishes.
We will soon eat out there on our celebration.
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