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What are the benefits of reading?

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There is so much benefit on reading. It works as entertainment, educationally, any informative. First of all reading is very fun. We can imagine infinitely, and we can explore the new world by reading books. Second, if we read, we can practice understanding and thinking critically. Lastly, if you read nonfiction books, we can learn many different facts about science,math, history and a lot of things. As you see, reading gives you a lot of benefit. Instead of watching social media, start to read books.

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Thank you for this, Eugene. Therefore, let's keep reading!

There is so much benefit on reading. 
>>>  There are so many benefits to reading.
It works as entertainment, educationally, any informative. 
>>>  It can be entertaining, educational, and informative.
First of all reading is very fun.  
>>>  First of all, reading is fun. 
We can imagine infinitely, and we can explore the new world by reading books. 
>>>  correct
>>> OR: 
We can imagine endlessly and explore new worlds through books.
Second, if we read, we can practice understanding and thinking critically. 
>>> correct
>>> OR: Second, reading helps us practice understanding and thinking critically. 
Lastly, if you read nonfiction books, we can learn many different facts about science, math, history and a lot of things. 
>>>  correct
>>> OR: Lastly, if you read nonfiction books, you can learn many different facts about science, math, history, and much more.
As you see, reading gives you a lot of benefit.
>>> As you can see, reading gives you a lot of benefits.
Instead of watching social media, start to read books.
>>>  Instead of spending time on social media, start reading books!
 
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