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How has technology affected people¡¯s approach to health and well-being?

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Technology is influencing on the modern people's lives.
One of them,
Wearable device checks physical activities, sleeping pattern and heart beat to give physical information.
Most people use them to keep their daily lives.

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Hi Young Soon!
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~~ Teacher Sharon
Technology is influencing on the modern people's lives.
>> Technology influences the modern lives of people.
One of them, Wearable device checks physical activities, sleeping pattern and heart beat to give physical information.
>> For example, some wearable devices can check physical activities, sleeping patterns and heart beat to obtain physical information.
Most people use them to keep their daily lives.
>> Most people use them to maintain their daily lives.
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