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Hi Young Soon!
I'm glad you're practicing again.
Please read the corrections below.
Hopefully, you can learn a thing or two.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
There is too many information in digital world.
>> There is too much information in the digital world.
It is difficult to distinguish whether it is real or fake information.
>> Correct
So we have to choose the information that provide by the credible and public media.
>> So we have to choose the information that is provided by credible and public media.
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