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Homework for February 04.

유슬기/2025-02-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
A management head should have strong leadership skills to guide the team and clear communication to everyone understands their roles and goals. They should also be good at decision-making and problem-solving to handle challenges and keep the team moving forward.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Elena!
I agree! Strong leadership and communication skills are important for being a department head. Also, the ability to solve problems and make decisions is necessary to manage the team better.
- T. Caitlyn 
A management head should have strong leadership skills to guide the team and clear communication to everyone understands their roles and goals. 
>> A management head should have strong leadership skills to guide the team and clear communication so that everyone understands their roles and goals.
They should also be good at decision-making and problem-solving to handle challenges and keep the team moving forward.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: They should also excel in decision-making and problem-solving to handle challenges and keep the team moving forward.
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