영작교정 첨삭 서비스

현재위치

Home > 영작교정 첨삭 서비스

Personally, how do you define "rich?"

차진혁/2025-04-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think the rich is Normal because many rich is bad But,few rich is very kind. So rich is very Normal.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below.  


Cheers,
Jean~~




                           


                                                    Personally, how do you define "rich?"



I think the rich is Normal because many rich is bad But,few rich is very kind.
So rich is very Normal.
>> I think the rich are ordinary because many wealthy people are bad, but a few are very kind. So, I believe being rich is quite normal.
이전글 목록 다음글