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김순님/2025-05-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When I take a walk, I used to organize my mind or I am preoccupied with other's characters. I think I am interested in people who I can learn something that I don't have. Most people I have known are fascinating and unique. They teach and show me wisdom through their behavior.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ms. Sunny!
That's the word "like" is describing. We tend to meet people because we learn and get inspiration from them. Otherwise, we will be avoiding them.
Have a good afternoon!
Aki~


When I take a walk, I used to organize my mind or I am preoccupied with other's characters.
>>> When I take a walk, I usually organize my thoughts or find myself thinking about other people's personalities.

I think I am interested in people who I can learn something that I don't have.
>>> I think I am interested in people whom I can learn something that I don't know.

Most people I have known are fascinating and unique.
>>> CORRECT!

They teach and show me wisdom through their behavior.
>>> They taught and showed me wisdom through their behavior.
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