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No, I don't believe in fairies.
유수빈/2025-05-20
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
No, I don't believe in fairies.
I just see them in fairy tale book or animations, so I don't think they actually exist.
But, when I think about them, they give me luck.
Therefore, they live in my imagination, and make me happy.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Subin!^^
I just see them in fairy tale book or animations, so I don't think they actually exist.
Therefore, they live in my imagination, and make me happy.
I want to believe that fairies exist, but I know it's impossible.
I want Thumbelina, but not Tinker Bell.
Andrea
No, I don't believe in fairies.
>> Correct
I just see them in fairy tale book or animations, so I don't think they actually exist.
>> I just see them in fairy tale books or animations, so I don't think they actually exist.
But, when I think about them, they give me luck.
>>But when I think about them, they give me luck.
Therefore, they live in my imagination, and make me happy.
>> Therefore, they live in my imagination and make me happy.
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