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Describe an experience where you purchased an item that was unreasonably expensive

이진태/2025-06-12

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Few years ago, I bought some snack at the tourist spot. However the price was very expensive. I understand it is tourist spot, nevertheless the price was almost five times than others.
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Few years ago, I bought some snack at the tourist spot.
>> A few years ago, I bought some snacks at a tourist spot.

However the price was very expensive.
>> However, the price was very expensive.
OR >> However, the price was quite high.

I understand it is tourist spot, nevertheless the price was almost five times than others.
>> I understand that it's a tourist spot, but still, the price was almost five times higher than elsewhere.
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