POWER ENGLISH

현재위치

> 영작교정 첨삭 서비스

homework

이유민/2025-06-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think it's the ideal time to get married after 2 years from getting a job. We need to earn some money before marriage because we should pay a lot of money for wedding cermony or living place. So I think male's average age of getting married is older than female's because of the military. I think I also can get married late because I'll enter the graduate school. So I delayed starting to earn money and even I don't have a boyfriend now. Maybe it's around 32,,?

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
I think early 30s is good.
_T. SHAY^^
***
I think it's the ideal time to get married after 2 years from getting a job.

>>I think the ideal time to get married is two years after starting a job.
We need to earn some money before marriage because we should pay a lot of money for wedding cermony or living place.

>>We need to earn some money before getting married because we should pay a lot of money for the wedding ceremony and a place to live.
So I think male's average age of getting married is older than female's because of the military.

>>I think the average age at which men get married is higher than that of women because of military service.

I think I also can get married late because I'll enter the graduate school.

>>I think I might get married late too because I'm going to graduate school.

So I delayed starting to earn money and even I don't have a boyfriend now.

>>I delayed starting to earn money, and I don't have a boyfriend right now.

Maybe it's around 32,,?

>>Maybe it's around 32.
OR: Maybe the average age is in the early 30s.