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What kind of people are there in your city?

차유진/2025-06-19

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There are many kind of people in my city for example doctor, office workers, police officers, firefighter so many kind of people in my city.
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Hi Yale!

I'm glad to see you doing your homework again. I hope you're feeling much better overall. 

Here's your first corrected composition. Please go over the revisions given below.   


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There are many kind of people in my city for example doctor, office workers, police officers, firefighter so many kind of people in my city.
>>> There are many different kinds of people in my city; for example, doctors, office workers, police officers, and firefighters. My city is full of all kinds of people.

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