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wish to be an actor

권경미/2025-06-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I want to live as an actor, even if just once.I want to experience the thrill of becoming someone else, taking on different roles, and living different lives through those characters. Through expressing different emotions in acting, I want to explore human psychology. It helps me understand people better and experience many sides of humanity.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. Judy! That’s such a cool dream! Acting really does let you step into someone else’s life and see the world from their eyes. It’s more than just playing a role; it’s feeling their emotions, thinking like they do, and understanding what drives them. I hope you get the chance to try it. It could be an amazing experience!

-T. Sonny

I want to live as an actor, even if just once.

>>Correct!

I want to experience the thrill of becoming someone else, taking on different roles, and living different lives through those characters.

>>Correct!
Through expressing different emotions in acting, I want to explore human psychology.

>>By expressing a wide range of emotions through acting, I hope to explore human psychology.
It helps me understand people better and experience many sides of humanity.

>>It helps me understand people better and experience the many sides of humanity.