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I like sweet potato tempura the most.

유수빈/2025-06-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I like sweet potato tempura the most. Especially, I like eating it with tteokbokki. Also, sweet potato tempura goes well with spicy tteokbokki soup because it's so sweet. I want to eat it often, but I can't because my body will be heavy.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Kara!^^

I never tried a sweet potato tempura.

Never even heard about it before.

When I looked it up on the internet, I wanted to try it.

Andrea

I like sweet potato tempura the most.

>> Correct

Especially, I like eating it with tteokbokki.

>> I especially like it with tteokbokki.

Also, sweet potato tempura goes well with spicy tteokbokki soup because it's so sweet.

>> Correct

I want to eat it often, but I can't because my body will be heavy.

>> I want to eat it often, but I can't because I might gain weight.