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What's your favorite book? Who's your favorite author?

차유진/2025-07-06

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My favorite book is 'romance of the three kingdoms' because it is history and novel book so it is very fun but characters name is hard and it is long so it is have a part.
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My favorite book is 'romance of the three kingdoms' because it is history and novel book so it is very fun but characters name is hard and it is long so it is have a part.
>>> My favorite book is Romance of the Three Kingdoms because it's a fascinating blend of history and fiction. It's really enjoyable, though the character names are difficult to remember and the book is quite long, so it's divided into parts.
>>> OR: Romance of the Three Kingdoms is my favorite book. It's a fun mix of historical events and storytelling. That said, the names are hard to follow, and the book is pretty long, which is why it's split into sections.
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