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What three (3) adjectives best describe your personality? (Homework)

손승아/2025-07-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The first activity that describes my personality best is watching baseball games with my family. I love watching baseball games with my family. The second activity is reading books. I like reading books, especially novels and comic books. The third activity is to chat with my family and friends. It is fun to chat with my family and friends.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello there, Anna! ^^,)

A person's personality is influenced by their experiences, surroundings, and biological makeup. These elements work together to produce the distinct cognitive, emotional, and behavioral patterns that define a person.

Focus on experiences that highlight your essential qualities and ideals while describing activities that reflect your personality.

Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework.
See you later in class! ^-^

__T. Mayleen :)


The first activity that describes my personality best is watching baseball games with my family.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: The first activity that best represents my personality is watching baseball with my family.
I love watching baseball games with my family.
>>> CORRECT
The second activity is reading books. I like reading books, especially novels and comic books.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Reading literature is the second task. I enjoy reading literature, particularly comics and novels.
The third activity is to chat with my family and friends. It is fun to chat with my family and friends.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: The third activity is to talk to my family and friends. It's wonderful to talk with my family and friends.
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