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Do you believe in palm reading or other forms of fortune telling like astrology? Why or why not?

신봉규/2025-07-09

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I don't believe in superstitions like palm reading or other forms. It is difficult to accept because it is not scientific and has not been proven. If a superstition has credible evidence, it can change one's mind.
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~~Teacher Ryka^^


I don't believe in superstitions like palm reading or other forms. It is difficult to accept because it is not scientific and has not been proven. If a superstition has credible evidence, it can change one's mind.
>> I don't believe in superstitions like palm reading or other similar practices. It's difficult for me to accept them because they are not scientific and lack proven evidence. However, if a superstition were supported by credible evidence, it might change my mind.
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