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Do advertisements influence your shopping choices?

김영순/2025-07-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Advertisement provide me lots of information. But I choose by comparing various options.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Young Soo!
You followed a good structure for your sentences.
Just take note of the details.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Advertisement provide me lots of information.
>> Advertisements provide me lots of information.
But I choose by comparing various options.
>> However, I choose by comparing various options.
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