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박서린/2025-07-16

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What did you do last weekend? What will you do this weekend? Do you have any specific plans? On Saturday, I shaked time with my boyfriend in my house. We made some "Jeon"(traditional Korean pancake) and enjoyed with drinks. At night, we went for a walk because we were very full. Seriously, If I hadn't gone, I would have thrown up. On Sunday, I studied certificate in international Trade all day long, and I squeezed in watching drama during short break time. This weekend, I'm going to my parent's house. We will go to drive suburbs and visit pretty cafe also.

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Hi Nieves,

It sounds like you had a productive weekend. Thank you for sharing them. Wishing you all the best in your endeavors. :)
Yay! The upcoming weekend will be family time. Make sure to create lots of wonderful memories with your parents, okay? See you later! :)
- Teacher Elly~

On Saturday, I shaked time with my boyfriend in my house.

>> On Saturday, I spent time with my boyfriend at my house.

We made some "Jeon"(traditional Korean pancake) and enjoyed with drinks.

>> We made some jeon (traditional Korean pancakes) and enjoyed them with drinks.

At night, we went for a walk because we were very full.
>> CORRECT

Seriously, If I hadn't gone, I would have thrown up.
>> Seriously, if I hadn’t gone for a walk, I would have thrown up.

On Sunday, I studied certificate in international Trade all day long, and I squeezed in watching drama during short break time.
>> On Sunday, I studied for my International Trade certificate all day and squeezed in some drama during a short break.

This weekend, I'm going to my parent's house. We will go to drive suburbs and visit pretty cafe also.
>> This weekend, I'm going to my parents’ house. We'll go for a drive in the suburbs and visit a nice café too.