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Is it necessary to have a goal in life? Why or why not?

김유진/2025-07-17

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Goal is an optional thing to set up for life.But If you have no goal in life, it would be such a boring life. Goal is what makes you move. if you have a call, you would be more productive and do every single thing with full of effort. People who doesn’t have a goal,they don’t have any motivation so they are in much more easier position to get burnout or depression

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Thank you for this Eugene!

Goal is an optional thing to set up for life.

>>> correct

>> OR: A goal is an option to have in life.

But if you have no goal in life, it would be such a boring life.

>>> correct

Goal is what makes you move.

>>> correct

>>> OR: A goal is what makes you go into action.

if you have a call, you would be more productive and do every single thing with full of effort.

>>> If you have a goal, you would be more productive and do every single thing with full effort.

People who doesn’t have a goal,they don’t have any motivation so they are in much more easier position to get burnout or depression

>>> People who don’t have a goal don’t have any motivation so they are in much more easier position to get burnout or depressed.