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Is compromise always necessary in a healthy relationship? Why or why not?

김유진/2025-07-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Compromise is necessary for every relationship to maintain it healthy. Even you and your partner’s mindset is similar and always have same opinions, In small parts, you might have arguments. And if one person keep their opinion and always support other, That relationship is not healthy. So instead of one person giving up their opinion, or arguing together, we should compromise opinion together so that everyone’s opinions making harmony. It is only way to decrease fighting in relationships.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Eugene!

Compromise is necessary for every relationship to maintain it healthy.

>>> correct

>>> OR: Compromise is necessary for every relationship to keep it healthy.

Even you and your partner’s mindset is similar and always have same opinions, In small parts, you might have arguments.

>>> Even if you and your partner’s mindset are similar and are always have same opinions, but in some small parts, you might have arguments.

And if one person keep their opinion and always support other, That relationship is not healthy.

>>> And if one person keeps their opinion to themselves and always support the other, that relationship is not healthy.

So instead of one person giving up their opinion, or arguing together, we should compromise opinion together so that everyone’s opinions making harmony.

>>> So instead of one person giving up their opinion, or arguing with each other, we should compromise on each other's opinion so that everyone’s opinion can harmonize with the other.

It is only way to decrease fighting in relationships.

>>> It is the only way to decrease fighting/arguments in relationships.