영작교정 첨삭 서비스

현재위치

Home > 영작교정 첨삭 서비스

My favorite board game is 'Halli Galli'.

유수빈/2025-07-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My favorite board game is 'Halli Galli'. It's a game that when the fruit of the card given by the other and I are the same fruit, and the number is five, the first bell is struck. So, if I have to win this game, I need quickness. Also, When I participate in this game, I'm always nervous, but it's so funny.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Kara!^^

My favorite board game is Snakes and Ladders. 
It is a game of luck. 
It's fun to play it with friends. 

Andrea

My favorite board game is 'Halli Galli'.
>> Correct 

It's a game that when the fruit of the card given by the other and I are the same fruit, and the number is five, the first bell is struck.
>> In this game, when my fruit card is the same as the one given by the other player, and the number is five, I should be the first one to strike the bell.  

So, if I have to win this game, I need quickness.
>> So in order to win the game, I have to be quick. 

Also, When I participate in this game, I'm always nervous, but it's so funny.
>> I feel nervous when I join this game, but on the other hand, it's fun. 
이전글 목록 다음글