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권경희/2025-07-22

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I think that even tourist should follow the local ordinances and law. Tourist is not only the privileged class but the exception. Moreover anytime and anywhere we should keep normal manner. If the country is America instead of Vietnam, Korean tourist can attack American woman at a self-booth ? Even if she get angry. I wonder that.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon, Ms. Lily!

The saying "When in Rome, do as the Romans do," which means that when you are visiting a new place, you should adapt to the local customs and traditions rather than trying to impose your own. Following the local ordinance is also necessary.

Thank you for this!

Aki~

I think that even tourist should follow the local ordinances and law.

>>> I think that even tourists should follow the local ordinances and laws.

Tourist is not only the privileged class but the exception.

>>> CORRECT!

Moreover anytime and anywhere we should keep normal manner.

>>> Moreover, anytime and anywhere, we should keep a normal manner.

>>> Furthermore, it's important to observe proper manners at all times and in all places.

If the country is America instead of Vietnam, Korean tourist can attack American woman at a self-booth ? Even if she get angry.

>>> If the country were America instead of Vietnam, would it be acceptable for a Korean tourist to attack an American woman at a self-service booth, even if she was angry?

I wonder that.

>>> CORRECT!