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Do you like meeting new people?

김재서/2025-07-29

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I like meeting new people! First, new people are interesting. Since they come from different backgrounds, we can share fresh stories. Second, new people are helpful. I can learn new information from them. That’s why I like meeting new people!

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Here's your third corrected composition, Jae Seo. Please take a look at the corrections below. Have a good one!

Cheers,

Jean~~

Do you like meeting new people?

I like meeting new people!

First, new people are interesting.

Since they come from different backgrounds, we can share fresh stories.

>>> OR: I enjoy meeting new people because they bring unique perspectives. Their diverse backgrounds allow us to exchange fresh and interesting stories.

>>> OR: I love meeting new people! Everyone’s got a story, and it's always fun hearing something fresh from different walks of life.

Second, new people are helpful.

I can learn new information from them.

>>> OR: Second, talking to someone for the first time is often helpful; I can gain fresh insights and learn new things from them.

That’s why I like meeting new people!

>>> OR: That’s why I genuinely enjoy getting to know unfamiliar faces; it’s always a chance to learn and connect.

>>> OR: Hence, I find interactions with strangers both meaningful and beneficial.