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I think cause of my eyes is cellphone.Because I like scrolling through my pone.And do that for much time.
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Hi, Jun Ki!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

I think cause of my eyes is cellphone.
>> I think the cause of my eye problem is too much cellphone exposure.
Because I like scrolling through my pone.
>> It's because  I like scrolling through my phone.
And do that for much time.
>> And I do that for a long period of time.
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