Q. Compare the time you spent time with your family when you were young and now that you've grown up. A. when I was middle school student, if my parents have free time, we usually went out to eat or visited somewhere nice. However, now, I work part time-job and have more things to do. Therefore, I don't have much time to spend with my family. So, I try to make those time I am with my family priceless. For example, I have some family time rather than watching youtube vidieos with my phone. Even though the amont of family-gathered time lacks, I completely think that the value of those serial moments surpass that lack.

Hey, Su In! Thank you for taking the time to complete your homework and share your answer with me. I can see that you made a genuine effort to compare your past and present experiences with your family, and you also included examples, which is a good habit for IELTS Speaking. To reach a band 7.0, you need to focus on improving your grammar accuracy, particularly verb tenses, articles, and word choice. Try to use more natural expressions and linking phrases such as “back then,” “compared to now,” or “as a result” to make your answer flow smoothly. Also, watch out for small spelling mistakes like “vidieos” or “amont,” as they can affect clarity. Overall, you are on the right track; your ideas are good, and with more practice using natural collocations and complex sentences, you can definitely reach a 7.0 or higher.