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전창민/2025-08-01

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HOMEWORK: What do you usually order in your favorite restaurant? My favorite food is beef. My wife dislike beef.. so, I don't have opportunity to eat beef. And beef is expensive. But, we common the favorite food is Sushi. So, we enjoy to order sushi.

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Hi Chang Min,
Thank you for taking the time to check my homework. :)
I’m a huge fan of beef too! And of course, sushi! Almost everyone loves it.
See you in class later. :)

- Teacher Elly~

My favorite food is beef.

>> CORRECT

My wife dislike beef.. so, I don't have opportunity to eat beef. And beef is expensive.
>> My wife dislikes beef, so I don’t have the opportunity to eat it. Also, beef is expensive.

But, we common the favorite food is Sushi. So, we enjoy to order sushi.

>> But we have a common favorite food: sushi. So we enjoy ordering sushi.

OR >> However, we share the same favorite food — sushi. So we enjoy ordering it.