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이영숙/2025-08-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
She play the piano very well. She likes chocolate.so she eat every day. She wakes up early morning. At 6 . I saw her at the bus stop. I gave her a gifted her birthday present.it yellow dress. We invited her to the our party.
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Hi, Michelle!
Great job on doing your homework. Just take note of minor corrections, especially in subject-verb agreement.
- T. Caitlyn 
She play the piano very well.
>> She plays the piano very well.
She likes chocolate.so she eat every day.
>> She likes chocolate, so she eats it every day.
She wakes up early morning. At 6 .
>> She wakes up early in the morning at 6.
I saw her at the bus stop.
>> CORRECT
I gave her a gifted her birthday present.it yellow dress.
>> I gave her a yellow dress as a birthday present.
We invited her to the our party.
>> We invited her to our party.
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