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My best decision this year was that let my daughter live with us, not alone. After she came back home from living alone near her university, my family had good time to get closer and to understand each other. So, I satisfied with my decision very much.

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Good evening, Ju Young. I am glad you made that decision and I am happy to know your family became closer. Thank you for sharing about your family. Have a good night and I look forward to the next one. Good work!^^ ~Teacher Jane


My best decision this year was that let my daughter live with us, not alone.
>> My best decision this year was to let my daughter live with us so she is not alone.

After she came back home from living alone near her university, my family had good time to get closer and to understand each other.
>> After she came back home from living alone near her university, my family spent more time together so we get closer and we understand each other better now.

So, I satisfied with my decision very much.
>> So I am very much satisfied with my decision.
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