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What do you think are the major challenges of working or studying in another country?

작성자: 황*하
2021-01-07 287

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Everything are challenges of working or studying in abroad because each country has their own culture. The differences of culture and system may cause a lot of problem when people live in other country. In my experience, housing was the first problem that I had encountered. There was different system to rent a house between Korea and the UAE. Especially, the checkbook was the thing that I haven't seen before. I didn't know how to issue, use and create sign. So, I was imposed the fine because of the misuse of checkbook. Language also can be the challenges. Many events happened to me but I didn't know how to express my opinions, to complain in nonsense situation and to ask question that I really would like to know. I think the most important thing in living abroad is learning the expression of complaints. This can be the first step adapting the lives in abroad. Next, people must putting their efforts to understand the culture that would help them to be the one of one's citizens.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there Sir Hwang~! ^^ What comes easy won’t last. What lasts won’t come easy. Nothing in life that’s worth anything is easy. Hard work betrays none!
Keep it up!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Everything are challenges of working or studying in abroad because each country has their own culture. 
>>> There are always challenges when working or studying abroad because each country has its own culture. 
The differences of culture and system may cause a lot of problem when people live in other country. 
>>> The cultural differences and system may cause a lot of problems when people live in another country. 
In my experience, housing was the first problem that I had encountered. 
>>> Based on my experience, accommodation was the first problem that I had encountered. 
There was different system to rent a house between Korea and the UAE.
>>> There are differences in rental system between Korea and the UAE.
 Especially, the checkbook was the thing that I haven't seen before.
>>> CORRECT
 I didn't know how to issue, use and create sign.
>>>  I didn't know how to issue, use and create signature on it. 
So, I was imposed the fine because of the misuse of checkbook. 
>>> So, I was charged because of the misused checkbook. 
Language also can be the challenges. 
>>> Language can also be challenging. 
Many events happened to me but I didn't know how to express my opinions, to complain in nonsense situation and to ask question that I really would like to know.
>>> There were a lot of things that happened to me but I didn't know how to express my opinions, to complain in nonsense situations and to ask questions if I would like to know something.
 I think the most important thing in living abroad is learning the expression of complaints. 
>>> CORRECT
This can be the first step adapting the lives in abroad. 
>>> This could be the first step when adapting the lives abroad. 
Next, people must putting their efforts to understand the culture that would help them to be the one of one's citizens.
>>> Next, people must give their effort to understand the culture that would help them to be one of the citizens.
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