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What is your plan for the weekend?

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I am planning to study English especially reading for the Ielts.
Also I am thinking about extending my eyelashes at the beauty shop. ^^
And stay home, which serving three meals for my family.

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Hi there Young Won!

This sounds like a very good plan. It is quite busy and meaningful.

Keep your sentences short and correct. Excellent job for this answer. See you in class tomorrow.

-T. Donna =)

I am planning to study English especially reading for the Ielts.
>> Correct! Or: IELTS

Also I am thinking about extending my eyelashes at the beauty shop. ^^
>> Correct!

And stay home, which serving three meals for my family.
>> I would also like to stay home and serve 3 meals for my family.
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