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I want to be a dipolomat

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I want to be a dipolomat. When I was 13, I watched a TV, and I saw a channel of . In that channel, the dipolomat appeared! I saw and concentrate, no matter how loud it is around. Then, I search about dipolomat. This job is help people who go some country, and deliver the news to our country. Also, I like traveling, and trip, so I am more interested in diplomats. I think it is the closest job for a diplomat to help the country and enjoy my hobby.

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Hi there Maria! 

Being a diplomat means being noble and taking care of your countrymen. You have to mediate between two countries and maintain a good relationship at all times.

I am very confident that you can fulfill the duties of a great South Korean diplomat someday. Well done on this essay! See you next time here.

-T. Donna =)

I want to be a dipolomat. When I was 13, I watched a TV, and I saw a channel of. 
>> I want to be a diplomat. When I was 13, I watched TV and saw it on channel. 

In that channel, the dipolomat appeared! I saw and concentrate, no matter how loud it is around.
>> In that channel, the diplomat appeared! I saw her/him and concentrated no matter how loud the noise around her/him was. 

Then, I search about dipolomat. This job is help people who go some country, and deliver the news to our country. 
>> Then, I searched about diplomat. This job is helping people who go to some country, and deliver the news to our country. 

Also, I like traveling, and trip, so I am more interested in diplomats. 
>> Correct!

I think it is the closest job for a diplomat to help the country and enjoy my hobby.
>> Correct!
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