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ESSAY: Many educational institutions give greater importance to subjects related to science and ignore subjects such as drama and literature. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?
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I think these day's science started with literatuer and drama.(like curiuos)
and also the development of two field are connected each other. If we continue to ignore ilterater, more scientice's development will slow.

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think these days science starts with literature and drama.
>>> CORRECT
(like curiuos) and also the development of two field are connected each other.
>>> Also, the development of the two fields are connected each other.
If we continue to ignore ilterater, more scientice's development will slow.
>>> If we continue to ignore literature, more science's development will go slower.
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