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What was something interesting about your weekend?

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Last Saturday morning, I met my friend after long time. She is one of the closest
neighbor. We went to a brunch cafe named Oasis. They have healthy foods and looks yammy.
For a while I didn't go any brunch cafe because of covid19.
We had enough chatting to blow our stress.
It was really thanksful and important time for me.

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Hello there Young Won!

It is so good to catch up with friends and neighbors in spite of Covid 19. You just have to be extra careful all the time.

See you later in class.

-T. Donna =)

Last Saturday morning, I met my friend after long time. She is one of the closest neighbor. 
>> Last Saturday morning, I met my friend after a long time. She is one of the closest neighbor. 

We went to a brunch cafe named Oasis. They have healthy foods and looks yammy.
>> We went to a brunch café named the Oasis. They have healthy foods and they look  yummy.

For a while I didn't go any brunch cafe because of covid19.
>> For a while I didn't go to any brunch café because of Covid19.

We had enough chatting to blow our stress.
>> Correct!

It was really thanksful and important time for me.
>> I was really thankful and this was an important time for me.
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