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What do you do to stay positive in a bad situation? Explain

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I try that don't think about a bad situation anymore and I imegine the good situation.
for example, how to play with my boyfrien when he come to here?, what will i eat tonight?...
that's to make me happy!

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Hello Yun Jeong,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)


What do you do to stay positive in a bad situation? Explain

I try that don't think about a bad situation anymore and I imegine the good situation.
>>> I try not to think about the bad situation and I imagine only the good/positive situations. 

for example, how to play with my boyfrien when he come to here?, what will i eat tonight?...
that's to make me happy!
>>> For example; how to spend time or hang out with my boyfriend when he comes here? What will I eat tonight? These are the things that make me happy!
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