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Q:What do you think students your age need?
A:I think students my age need bag,pencil,eraiser,and pencil case.
First, we have to put something in the bag.
Second, we need to write and erase.
Last, we need to put pencil and eraiser in the pencil case.

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Hello there Paul! Great job!

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow! :)

~Teacher Sheila

I think students my age need bag,pencil,eraiser,and pencil case.
>>I think students my age need a bag, pencils, erasers, and pencil case.

First, we have to put something in the bag.
>>CORRECT

Second, we need to write and erase.
>>CORRECT

Last, we need to put pencil and eraiser in the pencil case.
>>Last, we need to put pencils and erasers in the pencil case.
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