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What traits do you look for in a conversation partner?
-> I look for partner's voice tone in a conversation partner.
First, all people have each voice tone, so I can recognize someone with his voice tone.
Second, listening and remembering someone's voice tone is fun to me.
So I look for partner's voice tone in a conversation partner.

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I look for partner's voice tone in a conversation partner.
>> I look for the tone of voice in a conversation partner.  

First, all people have each voice tone, so I can recognize someone with his voice tone.
>> First, voice tones differ from person to person so you can easily recognize who's is which. 

Second, listening and remembering someone's voice tone is fun to me.
>> Lastly, listening and remembering someone's tone of voice is fun. 

So I look for partner's voice tone in a conversation partner.
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