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Hello, teacher!
I'm sorry, but I can't take this class anymore:(
Because I have a lot of things to do! (Studying to get a computer license, preparing to go to school...)
I was really happy to meet you, and I can improve my English speaking skill with you!
You give me confidence! Thanks a lot!
If I have a chance again, I really hope to study with you again!
Thanks again, teacher:)

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Hello, Mina! Huhu... I feel sad to hear that, but thank you so much for being a nice student. You were responsible and gentle. I wish you all the best! I hope you pass the computer test. See you when I see you! Keep safe! -Faith-

Hello, teacher!

>> CORRECT
I'm sorry, but I can't take this class anymore:( Because I have a lot of things to do!

>> I'm sorry, but I can't take this class anymore:( because I have a lot of things to do!

(Studying to get a computer license, preparing to go to school...)

>> (I'm studying to get a computer license as my preparation to go to school...)
I was really happy to meet you, and I can improve my English speaking skill with you!

>> I was really happy to meet you, and I could improve my English speaking skill with you!
You give me confidence!

>> You gave me confidence!

Thanks a lot!

>> CORRECT
 If I have a chance again, I really hope to study with you again!

>> CORRECT
Thanks again, teacher:)

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