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I think that the best place where I want to perform my music is Seoul Arts Center, in Seocho-gu, the area is next to Gangnam.
This is because, this hall is very famous hall, and not everybody performs in this hall, that is, only the renowned and skillful performer can play their music in here.
So, I dream that I hold my recital in this hall and communicate with audience someday.

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Good evening Sunny!

This dream is at your fingertips. I saw your You Tube video and I have seen and heard how you played- you were amazing!

Someday when you play at the Seoul Arts Center, I wish to be a part of the audience and be one of those who will give you a round of applause.

Thanks for this composition, I appreciate it much. Until next!

See you next week!

-T. Donna =)

I think that the best place where I want to perform my music is Seoul Arts Center, in Seocho-gu, the area is next to Gangnam.
>> Correct!
Or>> ... the area next to Gangnam.

This is because, this hall is very famous hall, and not everybody performs in this hall, that is, only the renowned and skillful performer can play their music in here.
>> This is because, this hall is very famous and not everybody performs in this hall, that is, only the renowned and skillful performers can play their music there.

So, I dream that I hold my recital in this hall and communicate with audience someday.
>> So, I dream to hold my recital in this hall and communicate with the audience someday.
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