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What is one famouse art work that you are familiar with and how does affect you?

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There were a lot of arts inspiring me while I have been living. It is hard to choose one for me but I can say that the most familiar art is KyungBok Palace in Seoul.
KyungBok Palace was built during Joseon Dynasty, which is the landmark of South Korea. Joseon Dynasty had prospered for over 500years from 1392 to 1910.
KyungBok Palace named very considerly which means that Enjoy great blessing and thrive.
I often visit there and walk around to find the four gates, and small architectures which have a story.
Visitting there make me calm and feel my ancestor's spirit. Furtheremore, I am thinking about that how will this place change by our decendants in the future.

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Good evening Young Won!

Truly, palaces in Korea are a great sight to behold. I have never seen one here in my country. They entail the past and make you realize about what happened before why these structures were built.

Well done in sharing this art masterpiece. See you tomorrow in our class.

Happy Valentine's to you and your husband!

-T. Donna =)

There were a lot of arts inspiring me while I have been living. It is hard to choose one for me but I can say that the most familiar art is KyungBok Palace in Seoul.
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Or: There are a lot of inspiring arts in this lifetime. It is hard to choose one for me but I can say that the most familiar art is the KyungBok Palace in Seoul.

KyungBok Palace was built during Joseon Dynasty, which is the landmark of South Korea. Joseon Dynasty had prospered for over 500years from 1392 to 1910.
>> Correct!

KyungBok Palace named very considerly which means that Enjoy great blessing and thrive.
>> KyungBok Palace was named considerably which means to enjoy great blessings and thrive.

I often visit there and walk around to find the four gates, and small architectures which have a story.
>> Correct! (Remove comma.)

Visitting there make me calm and feel my ancestor's spirit. Furtheremore, I am thinking about that how will this place change by our decendants in the future.
>> Visiting there makes me calm and I can feel my ancestor's spirit. Furthermore, I am thinking about how will this place be changed by our generations in the future.
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