¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Do you agree that tattoo is modern art?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*ȯ
2021-02-14 616

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®



My opinion is that tattoo is modern art, because tattoo is a expression way of drawer's mind or clients. Some tattoos are unique. I saw pictures of tattoo on website, The tattoos were drawn on a wound. The tattoo covered the wound, so the wound becomes base sketch of tattoo.I am sure that tattoo touched some's heart, and I am also touched. When I see the tattoo. There is no doubt that tattoo is modern art.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello Hwanny,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)




Do you agree that tattoo is modern art?

My opinion is that tattoo is modern art, because tattoo is a expression way of drawer's mind or clients. >>> My opinion is a tattoo a modern art, yes because a tattoo is an expression of a drawer's mind or the clients. 

Some tattoos are unique. I saw pictures of tattoo on website, The tattoos were drawn on a wound. 
>>> Some tattoos are unique. I saw pictures of tattoos on the website like this tattoo which was drawn on a scar. 

The tattoo covered the wound, so the wound becomes base sketch of tattoo. 
>>> The tattoo actually covered the wound, so the wound becomes the base sketch of the tattoo. 

I am sure that tattoo touched some's heart, and I am also touched. When I see the tattoo. 
>>> I am sure that this tattoo touched someone's heart, and I am also touched when I see the tattoo. 

There is no doubt that tattoo is modern art.
>>> CORRECT


* I agree, the tattoo made the scar so artistic and nothing to be ashamed off. ^^
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
105550 grammar ¼Õ*¸² ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 368
105549 Which is more powerful between feelings of love and feelings of... ±è*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 388
105548 home work ½É*¼º ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 7
105547 My favorite musical is \"The phantom of the opera\" ±è*¶û ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 379
105546 I... ¹®*°æ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 3
105545 What annoys you the most? ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 0
105544 What is your routine after you wake up in the morning? ¼Û*·É ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 471
105543 I... ¹®*°æ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 2
105542 Homework °­*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 393
105541 Do you prefer to have many friends or just a few that you are... ¼Û*·É ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 471
105540 Advantages and disadvantages of homeschooling. ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 585
105539 Would you be willing to pay higher taxes for a healthier... À¯*¸° ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 0
105538 Tuesday Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 450
105537 What might happen if you won¡¯t use any phones in a day, week,... ÇÑ*ºó ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 2
105536 Korea¡¯s exotic food ¼±*¸² ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 903
105535 Homework0209 ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 516
105534 HOMEWORK ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 550
105533 Homework ½É*»ó ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 598
105532 Can you tell me about the hardest thing you ever had to do? ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 1
105531 What offers can you refuse? Why? ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-09 1

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04