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What are the things you expect for this new year?
-> I am expecting about my new middle school for this new year.
First, I am wondering about my new friends in my new middle school.
Second, I am expecting about lots of new studies in my new middle school.
I am expecting about my new middle school for this new year because of those reasons.

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 I am expecting about my new middle school for this new year.
>> I expect a lot of things for middle school this new year. 

First, I am wondering about my new friends in my new middle school.
>> I wonder who will be my new friends. 

Second, I am expecting about lots of new studies in my new middle school.
>> I also expect to learn a lot of new things. 

I am expecting about my new middle school for this new year because of those reasons.
>> These are the things I expect the most for this new year. 
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