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If you are going to write a letter, for whom the letter would be and what will you say?
I will write a letter to my favorite singer IU
Because I admire IU
I will say I love you~ to IU!!^^

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Hello there Jenny, Writing a letter to your favorite singer could be very thrilling, but  do you know what can thrill you the most? It is when she writes you back. Why don't you give it a try?

~Teacher Aki ^^

I will write a letter to my favorite singer IU

>> Correct

OR: I want to write a letter for my favorite singer, IU
 Because I admire IU

>> Correct

OR: Because I admire her a lot and she inspires me.
 I will say I love you~ to IU!!^^

>>I will say that I love her.

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