¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Wh

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: Ȳ*ÇÏ
2021-02-17 818

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

All subjects are worth learning but I don't know if people have to learn subjects which are not interested in. Classic music is well known as making people calm, relaxed and happy. However, most people prefer to listen to pop music because it is more rhythmical than classic music. People also want to enjoy watching hansom guys or beautiful girls on TV but people don't want to see classic music programs and don't have any feeling when they meet musical players. Even though, classic music has positive effect to people I don't why we have to learn it. I think it is better learning something if somebody is interested in specific area. I don't even know what kind of positive effect classic music has. So I would like to say that it is important music but everybody don't have to learn it.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good day Mr. Hwang! Motivation also helps in making you active in life. You will struggle more to fulfill your goals. A self-motivated person always discovers a way to understand the issues hindering the path to complete a task. Moreover, they do not require other people¡¯s support to accomplish a challenging task close to them.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
All subjects are worth learning but I don't know if people have to learn subjects which are not interested in. 
>>> All subjects are worth learning but I don't know if people have to learn subjects which they're not interested in. 
Classic music is well known as making people calm, relaxed and happy.
>>> CORRECT
 However, most people prefer to listen to pop music because it is more rhythmical than classic music.
>>> CORRECT
 People also want to enjoy watching hansom guys or beautiful girls on TV but people don't want to see classic music programs and don't have any feeling when they meet musical players. 
 >>> People also want to enjoy watching handsome guys or beautiful girls on TV but people don't want to see classic music programs and don't have any feeling when they meet musical players. 
Even though, classic music has positive effect to people I don't why we have to learn it.
>>> Even though, classic music has positive effect to people I don't know why we have to learn it.
 I think it is better learning something if somebody is interested in specific area. 
>>> I think it is better to learn other things if somebody is interested in specific area. 
I don't even know what kind of positive effect classic music has.
>>> CORRECT
So I would like to say that it is important music but everybody don't have to learn it.
>>> So I would like to say that music is important but everybody doesn't have to learn it.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
105601 Homework (222) ¹Ú*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 564
105600 The meanings of the celebrating holidays ÀÌ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 578
105599 Is there much interesting architecture in your country? Ȳ*Á¶ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 627
105598 Homework ±è*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 2
105597 Name one or twe popular seollal gifts. ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 526
105596 grammar ¼Õ*¸² ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 515
105595 HOMEWORK Á¤*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 0
105594 HOMEWORK Á¤*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 0
105593 Homework °­*¸² ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 642
105592 I think best way to show respect to my parents is \"listen... ±è*¶û ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 574
105591 What are the things you like about the Lunar New year? ¼Û*·É ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 355
105590 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 0
105589 ¿µÀÛ ¼÷Á¦ ÀÌ*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 3
105588 The most difficult part about learning English À¯*¸° ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 1
105587 Homework {02/10} Â÷*ºó ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 464
105586 My favorite song À¯*¸° ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 3
105585 HOMEWORK ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 538
105584 HOMEWORK ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 448
105583 I think Paris. ±è*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 653
105582 Pokemon ±è*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-02-10 395

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04